In this example, the student highlights
key dialogue and adds brief comments: e.g.
· the
comment ‘confirms the Inspector[‘s] omniscient nature’ next to Sheila’s
line ‘Of course he knows’
· the
comment ‘Highlighting Gerald’s hypocrisy’ next to words spoken by Gerald and
the Inspector
The annotation in this example goes beyond
explanation by noting aspects of the writer’s techniques: e.g.
· the
reference to dramatic irony
· the
student’s own question relating to the play’s structure – ‘Why stop / pause the
play here?’
These brief notes serve as prompts that would
help the student if they need to refer to this part of the play in the exam.
This is an example of acceptable
annotation.