Component 2 Example Candidate Response - High (supporting studies)
Examiner comments
Where the script contains text, it avoids descriptive recall. Instead, it describes the creative process and creative choices. The candidate explains their choice of subject and colour pallet in a convincing and creative manner.
Some of the text reads as if part of a poem.
“I would like to convey ice. I want to pass flint. I want to convey the stone or rather the stone cold…It is the gray shades and strict lines convey this cold, and the stones, in their turn, convey severity and rigidity. Stone and cold, black and white history.”
This establishes the text as one of the creative components of the assignment and is developed latter in the poem on page 3 of the final work, the ERROR labels and, text the embedded into the image on page 15 of the final work. This work
attracts high marks in AO1 and AO4.