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    Cambridge International AS & A Level Drama 9482 
    Example 4

  • Now that you have read the assessment criteria, you may want to practise marking the performances. Watch the videos below, make a note of the strengths and weaknesses of the candidate and give a mark, before you read the moderator comments and marks below.



    • Part 1 Devised piece (30 marks)

      • Devised piece - 'Dear anxiety'


    • Commentary on devised piece

      The piece lasts for approximately 13’ 10” (including introductions)

      The piece relies strongly on the combination of physicality, (generally) non-naturalistic dialogue, varied used of back-projection and music and a carefully considered use of space.  

      The opening of the piece makes impressive use of soundtrack, which is the basis of the physicality of the piece, although this is less impactful at the opening than is the case later in the piece.  There is good contrast between the stillness of Candidate 1 versus the mechanised physicality of Candidate 2. This was slightly less effective when the soundtrack moved from a rhythmic pattern to a more melody-based theme following her scream as the increased volume made it more of a challenge for Candidate 2 to project over it.  The use of the pen writing (in the back projection) is effective but the combination of the soundtrack, the imagery and Candidate 2 trying to project was an intense mix so that the combination of all three borders on being distracting.

      At 1’50” Candidate 2 stands up, which brings in a change of episode in which both Candidate 2 and Candidate 1 are very well matched physically.  There is a strong sense of partnership, and both take their lead from the projection of the art mannequin.  The clarity of diction on the recording may not represent the experience of the live audience.  On the basis that both candidates take a declamatory approach to the dialogue, it was likely to be easier to distinguish words in live performance than it is on the recording.

      At 2’41”, the style of the drama changes in a section that juxtaposes non-naturalistic dialogue, interspersed with a more light-hearted style of music. The alternating lines delivered around the single block capture the nature of anxiety and this gives way to a section of overlapping dialogue.  The interplay between the two candidates also makes effective used of their height differences. 

      At around 6’ into the piece, there is burst of commercial advert-type music and an episode based on an Escitalopram (antidepressant) support group in which both candidates adopt different character personas. The use of the glove puppet adds an element of Absurdism to the piece. Although less physical than the other sections, the interplay between the two candidates works well. The transitions from chair to chair are inventive.

      Candidate 1 screams at just before 9 minutes, which is the start of a calmer section, accompanied by Minimalist-inspired piano music. At the stage, Candidate 1 really comes into his own and matches GIRL in his vocal power and physical presence.  A new element of Absurdism is introduced at around 10 minutes, with Candidate 1 making very effective use of puppet, excellent use of space, and some very appropriate use of facial expression. At around 12 minutes, the projected metronome imagery ushers in a very powerful lighting change and an engaging image of the two candidates seated in front of the metronome projection.  The sudden wash of light is slightly awkward, but this quickly reverts to a calmer ending.

      This is a creative piece which uses their chosen stimulus inventively. Both candidates demonstrate excellent physicality and commitment.


    • Candidates

      Candidates in the order they present themselves


      Candidates in order of merit

      Candidate

      A Response to stimulus

      (5 marks)

      B Ensemble, structure, role

      (15 marks)

      C Quality of analysis and evaluation

      (10 marks)

      Total mark awarded

      (30 marks)

      Candidate 1

      5

      15

      8

      28

      Candidate 2

      5

      15

      10

      30


    • Devised piece: Candidate 1

      Devised piece: Candidate 2

    • Part 2 Scripted performance (30 marks)

      Scripted performance - 'The Fall of the House of Usher' by Steven Berkoff


    • Commentary on scripted performance

      Candidate 1 and Candidate 2 then continue, speaking individually and in unison, with a continuation of fluid movement to move the story forward. It comes to a climax at 3:06 when the pace and volume is increased, thus creating tension.

      3:20 There is a lighting change to a downward white spotlight and the text is accompanied by music box style music, while the characters dance together. At 3:57 the mood and lighting change a letter is read between Candidate 3 playing Edgar and Candidate 2 playing Usher. The candidates define their roles well here, both vocally and physically.

      4:56 The lighting and mood change again as Edgar talks about his feelings of the House of Usher.  Candidate 1 and Candidate 2 go back to their fluid movements to complement the music and mood. The movement dynamics then change as he speaks and helps the urgency and significance of the monologue. He also recites in a physical way, so the stage picture is interesting and engaging. There is a clever moment at 5:50 when he is physically drawn in by them. Usher then announces “he has arrived” and her higher pitch matches her excitement well.

      6:45 The music, mood and lighting change again as he enters the house. The use of physical theatre by Candidate 1 and 2 depicts this entrance. At 8:20 the scene then changes when we hear a dramatic extract from the third Movement of Beethoven’s Fifth Symphony, when Edgar, Candidate 3and Madeline, Candidate 3 mime the scene. This leads to Usher’s monologue played by Candidate 2. The stylised fluid gestures now are performed by Candidate 3 and Candidate 1 to complement this monologue.

      9:50 Usher greets Edgar and repeats this line three times, each time increasingly in intensity and volume. The addition of black silk used by Candidate 1 and Candidate 2 to represent death and decay are effective and allow variation to the stage picture. They wrap Madeline in the silk to represent her death. However, as the scene progresses, they see her come back to life and at 16:03 the flashing lights, intense music and screams bring the characters fall to the floor. He concludes the performance saying “the deep and dank tarn at my feet closed sullenly and silently over the fragments of the 'House of Usher'”.

      The ensemble demonstrates a comprehensive stylistic awareness of Berkoff and the non-naturalistic way of delivering lines is always effective. Their physicality is impressive and their diction and projection always clear. The transitions between scenes are slick and almost unnoticeable.

    • Candidates

      Candidates in the order they present themselves


      Candidates in order of merit

      Candidate

      A Interpretation and Performance Skills

      (15 marks)

      B Communication

      (15 marks)

      Total mark awarded

      (30 marks)

      Candidate 1

      15

      15

      30

      Candidate 2

      15

      15

      30

      Candidate 3

      15

      15

      30


    • Scripted performance: Candidate 1