Higher
marks would be attracted in AO3 if the candidate had provided a written and
visual analysis which went beyond research notes, gathered feedback, and a
script. The written analysis should be about the creative process, rather than
simply a description of activity. The written analysis should focus on the
development of the investigation and a critical review of its progress.
The
investigation would be significantly improved if the candidate had analysed the
feedback they had gathered. A relatively large sample provides an opportunity
to recognise recuring comments and patterns of opinion. The candidate could
have used quantitative and/or qualitative approaches to their analysis. This
would have attracted higher marks in AO1 and AO3. Marking in AO3 would have
been improved where the candidate describes the implications of their findings
and applies this to their work. This relatively sophisticated approach would
also demonstrate a level of engagement and independence which could be rewarded
in AO4.
The
animation would have benefited from the candidate gathering more information in
preparation for the activity. The candidate could also have considered a
broader range of sources, for example, by including books, magazines, personal
photographs, experimental artwork, or descriptions from literature. This would
attract marks in AO1. The candidate mentions the work of several digital
artists and film makers, however the development of the candidate’s ideas would
have benefited from a more focused investigation into the chosen artists. The
work would have also been improved by considering a broader range of creative
practitioners. This would have provided
the candidate with the potential for idea development, alternative ways of
working and an expanded vocabulary of visual language.
The
characters for the animation remained underdeveloped during the investigation. There
is also little evidence of the development of backgrounds for the characters.
The characters in the final outcome are those which are found in the storyboard
and early sketches. The work would be significantly improved if the candidate
had built on the qualities of the thumbnails and developed rendered characters
and backgrounds. This would have attracted marks in AO2, AO3 and AO4.
Marks in AO4 are
attracted where intentions are realised. The investigation intended to develop
a moving animation but this was not available. Even a rough cut of an animation
would have gone some way to provide an appropriate digital response and to demonstrate
engagement with the investigation.