Section outline
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Now that you have read the speaking assessment criteria grids, you may want to practise marking a speaking test. Listen to the candidate responses below, make a note of the strengths and weaknesses of the candidate and give a mark, before you read the examiner comments and marks below.
Please note: Information about the candidate and centre has been removed from the recordings to protect the identity of the candidate.
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High level response
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Transcript and commentary
Example candidate response transcript – high
Role play 9 transcript
Teacher/examiner: Seit wann bist du schon in Köln?
Candidate: Seit 2018 bin ich in Köln? [Good inversion of verb, though “seit 2018” is already sufficient for full marks.]
Teacher/examiner: Ah wirklich? [Good, natural reaction makes RP sound like a conversation.] Und wie gefällt dir die Stadt?
Candidate: Also, [Good linking word.] Köln ist eine sehr schöne Stadt. Es gibt sehr viele Gebäude, das sind sehr alt und ich mag Köln sehr gut. [Full answer]
Teacher/examiner: Die Stadt gefällt mir auch sehr. [Good link.] Wie [Script requires Was, but clear enough] sind hier die größten Umweltprobleme deiner Meinung nach?
Candidate: Also, jetzt wegen [Good preposition.] Corona, Leute tragen die Maske an und es gibt viele Maskenmϋll in die Straße. [Clear despite errors. An unusual, up-to-date example.]
Teacher/examiner: Da bin ich mit dir völlig einverstanden. [Good link.] Was hast du bei dir zu Hause schon fϋr die Umwelt gemacht?
Candidate: Also, ich habe die Mϋll rein und ich habe alle Essen in Mϋll eingetragen. [Unclear verbs, but point is communicated - just.]
Teacher/examiner: Super! Ich sehe, bist du sehr umweltbewußt. Und was wollen [Script requires sollen, but clear.] wir heute Nachmittag machen?
Candidate: Wir können gern in die Stadt gehen und vielleicht sehen, wie schlecht die Umweltprobleme ist, in die Stadt, und wir können auch essen gehen, also Essen das vegetarisch ist, weil es sehr gut fϋr die Umwelt. [Shorter answer would probably be preferable, in case the main points are obscured. That is not the case here however.]
Teacher/examiner: Das ist ein guter Plan. Du hast viele tolle Ideen! Wir sind am Ende des Rollenspiels. [Good, clear finish to role play section of the examination.]
Topic conversation 1 transcript
Teacher/examiner: Jetzt werden wir ϋber zwei verschiedene Themen sprechen. Zuerst sprechen wir ϋber das Thema Kleidung. [Good example of how to manage this switch to the topic conversations.] Wie viel Geld gibst du jeden Monat fϋr Kleidung aus?
Candidate: Also, es ist immer anders, aber [Colloquial and natural introduction to a response.] letztes Monat ich habe zehn Euro bekommen.
Teacher/examiner: Und [A good idea, to add this linking conjunction.] welche Farbe trägst du am liebsten?
Candidate: Ich liebe weiß und schwarz.
Teacher/examiner: Wo kaufst du normalerweise deine Kleidung und warum?
Candidate: Also, normalerweise ich geh’ in die Stadt, in der Stadt [Shows case awareness, but opts for the wrong one, and candidates should preferably not normally pause to correct their own grammar.] und Kleidung kaufen, weil [Justification.] es sehr viele verschiedene Kleidung gibt.
Teacher/examiner: Erzähl mir bitte etwas mehr. [Asks extension question (as provided) to encourage a fuller response.]
Candidate: Also, zum Beispiel [Exemplification, to give the required detail.] in der Stadt es gibt sehr viele modern Kleidung und es gibt sehr viele – im Jahre – also schönes Kleidung in der Stadt.
Teacher/examiner: Beschreibe, was du in den letzten Ferien getragen hast und warum.
Candidate: Also, letzte Ferien ich habe eine Rock und ein T-Shirt getragen, weil das mag ich am liebsten. [Justification, with correct superlative adverb.]
Teacher/examiner: Kannst du noch meher darϋber sagen? [Uses an alternative extension question.]
Candidate: Also, ich mag schwarz und weiß, deswegen [Justification, with unusual adverb.] träge ich immer schwarz und weiße T-Shirt an und schwarzen Rocken an.
Teacher/examiner: Wenn du später alt bist, was fϋr Kleidung wirst du tragen?
Candidate: Ich glaube, immer noch [Good adverb.] schwarz und weiß.
Teacher/examiner: Erzähl mal, [Good, colloquial introduction to a question.] Wie kleiden sich die Jugendlichen in deinem Heimatland? [Extra question of Teacher/examiner’s choice.]
Candidate: Können Sie es noch mal (sagen)? [Good way to ask for repetition of question.]
Teacher/examiner: Wie kleiden sich die Jugendlichen in deinem Heimatland? [Repeats additional question.]
Candidate: Ach so, [Good. Shows that repeated question has been understood.] ich glaube, es ist gleiche in meinem Heimatland, also schwarz und weiß… vielleicht [Humour!] und manche Leute mögen.. also..rote T-Shirt oder zum Beispiel [Exemplification.] orange oder gelb, ja viele Farbe, verschiedene Farbe.
Teacher/examiner: Kannst du noch mehr darϋber sagen? [Examiner tries to stretch candidate further.]
Candidate: Es gibt auch, jedes Jahr es gibt ein Mode, und z.B. letztes Jahr Leute hat getragt [Attempts example in a different tense.] eine kurze T-Shirt, also der kurz das war der Style letztes Jahr.
Teacher/examiner: Findest du die Schuluniform gut? [Additional extra question to ensure the conversation lasts long enough.]
Candidate: Ja?
Teacher/examiner: Warum?
Candidate: Weil, wenn es kein Schuluniform gibt, dann muss ich jeden Morgen suchen, was ich anziehen will [Excellent justification.] und das macht.. also, ich will mehr lernen und mehr in mein Freizeit machen, aber wenn ich Kleidung suchen und anziehen, das macht viel Zeit also, viel Zeit aus, und.. [Excellent further detail.]
Teacher/examiner: Laßt uns jetzt ϋber das Thema Menschen und Orte sprechen. [Concludes first conversation with an introduction to the second.]
Topic conversation 4 transcript
Teacher/examiner: In welchem Land lebst du?
Candidate: Ich leb’ jetzt in Deutschland.
Teacher/examiner: Und welche Sprachen spricht man dort?
Candidate: Deutsch und Englisch.. (unclear) [Good, short answers to first two questions. This technique is to be recommended, as extensive responses are more appropriate to questions 3 to 5.]
Teacher/examiner: Welche Vorteile gibt es, in diesem Land zu leben?
Candidate: Also, fϋr mich, [Idiomatic.] ich kann sehr gut Deutsch lernen, in Deutschland, und es kann die Kultur lernen und also viele andere Leute kennenzulernen. [Detailed examples.]
Teacher/examiner: Erzähl mir bitte etwas mehr. [Extension.]
Candidate: Also, z.B. wenn ich hier in Deutschland leb’, dann ich kann, kann ich [Realises inversion of the verb is required in this complex construction.] deutsche Freundin oder Freunde kennenzulernen und viele auf Deutsch sagen, und es wird gut fϋr mein Zukunft.
Teacher/examiner: Erzähl mir von einem interessanten Ort, den du in diesem Land einmal besucht hast.
Candidate: Also, der Hauptstadt Berlin, und es war eine sehr schöne Stadt und es gibt sehr viele altes Gebäude und es war West- und Ostdeutschland vorher [Details of history.] aber jetzt ist es zusammen. Es gibt viel historische Dings und ich mag Berlin sehr. [Personal input.]
Teacher/examiner: Ja, und was hast du dort gemacht?
Candidate: Also, ich hab’ im Museum besuchen und ich hab’ hingehen. Ich habe auch Stadtrundfahren gemacht.
Teacher/examiner: Willst du in der Zukunft in dem Land bleiben, in dem du jetzt wohnst?
Candidate: Ja.
Teacher/examiner: Warum?
Candidate: Also, jetzt bin ich hier [Inversion] wegen Deutschland und fϋr mein Zukunft, also in die Universität gehen. Deswegen [Effective use of adverb, and again followed by verb inversion.] werde ich hier bleiben [Correct use of future tense.] und mehr Deutsch lernen, zu gut zu werden. [Good reason for plan.]
Teacher/examiner: Erzähl mir etwas ϋber einen Plan fϋr einen Besuch in ein anderes Land, den du in den nächsten Jahren machen möchtest. [Further question, chosen by teacher/examiner.]
Candidate: Können Sie noch mal …?
Teacher/examiner: Erzähl mir etwas ϋber einen Plan fϋr einen Besuch in ein anderes Land, den du in den nächsten Jahren machen möchtest. [Repeats the question.]
Candidate: Also, ich hätte gern nach Großbritannien besuchen [Attempts a subjunctive construction.] und, oder auch Italien besuchen, und, weil es gibt sehr weil es sehr viele historische… also.. ϋber Musik geben. Deswegen werde ich da rϋbergehen, und... also Leute kennenzulernen, und die Sprache lernen [two futures] fϋr mein Zukunft, weil ich Musik dort lernen möchte. [Excellent word order in subordinate clause, and good justification.]
Teacher/examiner: Das klingt ja super! [Very encouraging and supportive examining.] Kannst du noch mehr darϋber erzählen?
Candidate: Und ja, also England.. Leute sprechen Englisch, also es ist sehr einfach fϋr mich, da gehen und Musik lernen, aber Italien, z.B. Italien, in Musik es gibt sehr viele Wörter auf Italienische, deswegen werde ich nach Italien gehen und Musikvokabeln oder –wörter lernen und Leute kennenzulernen. Ja. [Very detailed reasons given, to complete the second conversation and the speaking test.] - Whole test - click to listen
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Moderator comments - Role play
Role play card 9
Conduct of the testThe teacher/examiner conducts this role play impeccably at an appropriate speed, with particularly appropriate and natural reactions to each of the candidate’s responses. This helps to create a very natural-sounding conversation, despite the fact that the questions are all scripted. The teacher/examiner accepts the answer to question 4 without feeling the need to repeat it, even though the verbs used by the candidate are rather unclear. No re-phrasing of the questions is allowed, so this was good practice, even if awarding the full mark of two for the given response did not seem appropriate to the teacher/examiner at the time.Candidate response
This is a responsive candidate, who understands all the questions immediately and gives clear answers, communicating all the required information, except perhaps for question 4, where the verbs are slightly ambiguous. Many candidates seem to struggle with seit wann? questions, but this candidate is clearly very familiar with what is required from question 1. Even if the response was a little unusual, it was clearly acceptable. The moderator decided that the candidate response to question 4 was in fact sufficient for the full two marks. The key to full marks is successful communication and this candidate was considered to have achieved it. The past time frame was appropriate, even if the verbs were used rather inaccurately. Please note: even verb errors may be considered to be minor if communication is achieved.
Mark awarded for task 1 = 2 out of 2
Mark awarded for task 2 = 2 out of 2
Mark awarded for task 3 = 2 out of 2
Mark awarded for task 4 = 2 out of 2
Mark awarded for task 5 = 2 out of 2
Total mark awarded = 10 out of 10
Moderator comments - Topic conversationsTopic 1: KleidungTopic 4: Menschen und OrteConduct of the test
This teacher/examiner exhibits some very good practice in her conduct of these conversations. It is particularly worth noting her regular use of extension questions to encourage fuller responses. These can take any form the teacher/examiner wishes, as long as ideas or vocabulary are not simply given to the candidate. The two examples for extension questions provided in the Instructions for Teachers/Examiners are ideal, as used on this occasion: Erzähl mir bitte etwas mehr and Kannst du noch mehr darϋber sagen?
In order to ensure that each conversation lasted the required four minutes, the teacher/examiner also asked further unscripted questions in both of them. These were perhaps not ideally phrased, as the candidate twice had to ask for the further questions to be repeated. The candidates are of course unaware of which questions are provided in the instructions and which are added by the teacher/examiner.
Candidate response
The candidate responds confidently throughout and communicates consistently relevant information. There are many examples of ideas being expanded upon and developed, even without the candidate having to be prompted to do so: for example, her detailed explanation as to why a school uniform is a good idea. For these reasons, both the teacher/examiner and the moderator placed this performance in the 'Very good' level of the mark scheme for Communication. All the criteria for this descriptor are present. However, occasional rephrasing is required for the teacher/examiner’s own extra questions. This is one of the criteria for a 'Good' rather than a 'Very good' performance and indicates that a mark from the bottom of the top level, so 13 marks are appropriately awarded.
Mark awarded for Communication = 13 out of 15
The candidate is clearly fluent. Her ability to communicate is clearly good despite a fair number of errors. It should be borne in mind that the emphasis of this syllabus is firmly on spontaneity of response and on communication, which can still be achieved without strict grammatical accuracy. Nevertheless, the number of minor errors here would indicate that the most appropriate mark for Quality of Language should come from the level labelled 'Good' rather than 'Very good'. There are errors of word order, case, adjective endings and verb formation, none of which however impede comprehension of what she wishes to say. There is a good range of vocabulary and structures and good pronunciation and intonation. The errors are certainly not frequent, so a mark from the 'Satisfactory' level would be inappropriate here.
Mark awarded for Quality of Language = 11 out of 15
Total mark awarded = 34 out of 40
Moderator comments - Whole test
How the teacher/examiner performance could improve
It is difficult to suggest how this teacher/examiner performance could be improved. The examination is conducted in a positive and lively fashion, with natural interchanges with the candidate and encouraging comments. The candidate has achieved her true potential, which is the most important thing, and has undoubtedly had a positive and possibly even an enjoyable experience in taking this potentially very demanding examination.
How the candidate performance could improveThe candidate could improve in some areas of German grammar, and possibly of vocabulary, but is essentially already performing at the required standard for a good or very good grade at Cambridge IGCSE level. -
Common mistakes and misconceptions
- In Role play 9: seit wann? surprisingly caused difficulty for many candidates. No specific knowledge about Cologne was expected, even though the role play takes place there, simply general information and opinions on environmental issues.
- In Topic conversation 1: many candidates did not know, or could not respond correctly to, the simple word Farbe, and instead talked about an item of clothing, as the overall topic had been stated by the teacher/examiner to be Kleidung.
- In Topic conversation 4: some candidates confused Vorteile with Nachteile and many did not recognise the key-word Ort, which was part of the overall theme of the topic and should be an essential item.
For further details about how candidates performed in this particular examination series please refer to the Principal Examiner Report for Teachers.
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