The notes in the margin make useful
comments on character; for example, the Inspector ‘is very intimidating’, ‘Has
a presence’ and is himself ‘Not intimidated’. There are also useful reminders
about the writer creating ‘shock’ and ‘sympathy’, showing that the student is
thinking about characters in a play performed in front of an audience rather
than real-life people.
This provides acceptable annotation.
However, the student could make their annotation more effective for the exam by
restricting their use of the highlighter pen.
Most of the stage direction that introduces the Inspector is
highlighted. A better strategy would be to highlight two phrases that really
illustrate the Inspector’s intimidating nature.
The
student has highlighted key words and phrases in the poem, which would provide
useful potential quotations in the exam. However, the notes linked to the
highlighted text are not allowed, as many are written in sentences, some of
them quite extended. Overall, the annotation in this example is not
acceptable.
Such
detailed notes may help to increase the student’s appreciation of the poem in
their revision, i.e. before the exam. However, concise comments in note form
would be more helpful in the exam. These would serve as prompts for specific
ideas the student might have when responding to the specific question set in
the exam. It is important to remember that a poetry question will not simply
ask students to unload everything they know about a poem. They must select
ideas that address the question.
In this example, the student has used much
highlighting, not just by using coloured highlighter pens, but also by
underling, circling words and phrases and putting others in boxes.
Although the page appears somewhat busy,
the student’s notes are in note form and not in sentences. The notes relate
both to ideas in the poem (e.g. the speaker ‘blames her’ and ‘he will never own
her’) and the poet’s techniques (e.g. personification, pathetic fallacy,
caesura). These will serve as useful prompts in the exam.
Perhaps an even more effective approach
would be to write notes about content to the left of the poem and notes on
techniques to the right of the poem.
This is an example of acceptable
annotation. The student will need to select only those notes that are
relevant to the question asked in the exam and should avoid trying to include
everything in their notes.