Component 2 Example Candidate Response - Low (supporting studies)
Completion requirements
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Examiner comments
This page presents the second style the candidate has created. A paperclip necklace represents the candidate’s desire for a “quirky style”.
The candidate demonstrates satisfactory management of the model and some adequate control of lighting, however on this page there is less of a sense that the candidate recognises the visual potential of their photographs. There is
little evidence of selection or editing of the photographs.
The quality of the page layout is acceptable.
The text contains personal opinions and claims which have not been substantiated by the candidate’s photographs or tested by the constraints of a typical online magazine feature.
