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The candidate continues to describe their ideas about fashion and style, and they include images of unique styles. On this page a block of text is repeated. AO1 is concerned with the ability of learners to collect and investigate ideas. An indiscriminate or uncritical collection of images or text will not suffice for an appropriate activity.

Among the evidence available, the candidate does not demonstrate that they are using appropriate sources, which impacts the mark awarded for this AO.

The candidate goes on to identify an idea for their style guide, which includes an outfit which takes into account wearability, adaptability, and comfort.

The candidate has not yet begun any substantial research into style guides or begun any exploration of media to produce a style guide. This frustrates marks in AO1 and AO2.



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