Component 2 Example Candidate Response - Low (supporting studies)
Examiner comments
The candidate chooses to use digital photography as the area of study to respond to the theme Style Guide. The candidate supports their work with a considerable amount of text in proportion to visual material. Much of the work is satisfactory or adequate.
In addition to research material, the candidate focuses exclusively on photographs of models posing with garments and fashion accessories. The candidate uses a three-column layout to present an introduction to their style guide. The title is presented in an attractive font and the body text is clearly formatted. The page also contains attractive images from the candidate’s research. The candidate includes an example of a style guide.
The intention of the assignment is described, and the candidate states how they aim to achieve this.
The candidate seeks to present new and unique styles. Some claims are made for the depth of research undertaken by the candidate. These claims would have more substance if supported by reliable evidence.